Derek redmond is a champion at the 200 race . At the beginning of the race he did some stretches.
Derek redmond was very fast until he stop
at 150 meters which is half of the race . The problem was that he broke his hamstring and felt very upset and was worried about the race but did you know what he did next he never gave up .So he started to hoping on one foot.
Derek redmond’s dad help him by lifting him to the end of the race making sure that he went to Hospital . the race teach me champions are careful strong and helpful like if someone broke his leg and was crying I would help him and make sure that he went to the sick bay to rest . So if you see people crying don’t just walk away do something about it .
Wow great work Giovanni I like the nice words
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ReplyDeleteI love how you put facts into your writing and did this happen this year ?
ReplyDeleteBy Latoya
I didn't know that the half of the race was 150 meters.
ReplyDeleteWow I like this piece of writing, I never new about that. I learnt a lot about Derek Redmond at the Olimpics.By Clarabell Rm12 H.E.S
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could add more family or friends of Derek Redmond.Clarabell Rm12 HES
Deleteso inspirational helping people not to give up during anything
ReplyDeleteThat's really cool and funny have you thought of making another one.
ReplyDeleteby Lochlan room 12
great describing do you think you can tell me what place he came in? But I bet he won in his fathers heart. Ruby Wright Hamilton East School Rm12
ReplyDeleteI like how your dad didn't give up. What numbers did your dad come?
ReplyDeleteI like your blog. Ahmed rm9
150 meters i wonder how long the actually race is
ReplyDeleteZaria HES school
200 meters!! WOW!! I'm really happy Derek didn't give up. And great work with the information at the top. It makes me glad to here others helping others.
ReplyDeleteJade HES School.
I enjoyed this post because you made it that he is worth something else.Rm 11
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