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Thursday, 18 August 2016

NEVER GIVE UP!

 Derek redmond is a champion at the 200 race . At the beginning of the race he did some stretches.

Derek redmond  was very fast until  he stop 
at 150 meters  which is half of the race . The problem was that he broke his  hamstring  and felt very upset and was worried about the race but did you know what he did next he never gave up .So he started to hoping on one foot.

Derek redmond’s  dad help him by lifting him to the end of the race making  sure that he went to Hospital . the race teach   me champions are careful strong  and helpful like if someone broke his leg and was crying I would help him  and make sure that he went  to the sick bay to rest . So if you see people crying don’t just walk away do something about it .

 

13 comments:

  1. Wow great work Giovanni I like the nice words

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  2. I love how you put facts into your writing and did this happen this year ?

    By Latoya

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  3. I didn't know that the half of the race was 150 meters.

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  4. Wow I like this piece of writing, I never new about that. I learnt a lot about Derek Redmond at the Olimpics.By Clarabell Rm12 H.E.S

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    1. Maybe you could add more family or friends of Derek Redmond.Clarabell Rm12 HES

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  5. so inspirational helping people not to give up during anything

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  6. That's really cool and funny have you thought of making another one.


    by Lochlan room 12

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  7. great describing do you think you can tell me what place he came in? But I bet he won in his fathers heart. Ruby Wright Hamilton East School Rm12

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  8. I like how your dad didn't give up. What numbers did your dad come?
    I like your blog. Ahmed rm9

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  9. 150 meters i wonder how long the actually race is

    Zaria HES school

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  10. 200 meters!! WOW!! I'm really happy Derek didn't give up. And great work with the information at the top. It makes me glad to here others helping others.

    Jade HES School.

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  11. I enjoyed this post because you made it that he is worth something else.Rm 11

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