tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3127888559788163905.post1044905893841584868..comments2017-12-06T14:57:25.023+13:00Comments on Giovanni @ Pt England School: My Weekend PES Blogs Admin 2015http://www.blogger.com/profile/00718590749281782598noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3127888559788163905.post-53431911096939158582016-09-14T19:15:35.105+12:002016-09-14T19:15:35.105+12:00wow I cant believe that you write that. maybe you ...wow I cant believe that you write that. maybe you should have more full stops, and commas because I was out of breath. but great job I like the way you explain what you had done in your weekend.<br /><br />by Racheal room 8Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3127888559788163905.post-45804086088585905662016-09-14T19:11:26.625+12:002016-09-14T19:11:26.625+12:00You could've added the name of the movie? I lo...You could've added the name of the movie? I loved how you have added heaps of punctuation! Maybe you should break some of the story down into short pieces? <br /><br />Alexus.A Room8Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3127888559788163905.post-68674174853095366792016-09-07T09:18:41.278+12:002016-09-07T09:18:41.278+12:00What a wonderful story.I loved how you added speec...What a wonderful story.I loved how you added speech marks.Maybe you could add a bit more detail<br />Keisha room 9 Hamilton East SchoolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3127888559788163905.post-86677748387179359542016-08-30T12:13:18.885+12:002016-08-30T12:13:18.885+12:00What was the name of the movie?
I think that you s...What was the name of the movie?<br />I think that you should add pictures.<br />I really liked the story.<br /> JisuAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3127888559788163905.post-77783380066085897992016-08-29T23:06:02.731+12:002016-08-29T23:06:02.731+12:00Well done Giovanni, this is an awesome story about...Well done Giovanni, this is an awesome story about your weekend. Good on you for using capital letters and commas! It is so sad that you fell over and hurt yourself :( Sharisse Scanlanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03474406992432270458noreply@blogger.com